10Eng: Creative writing matrix task 7 Alphabet Story

What A Bad day for a Certain Drop off in this kind of weather. Every day I see people walking inside and out with bags Full of food. Taking it to their car and  Getting to there Home. In that time a lot of people wore Jackets because of the weather. Kind or not just making it feel Longer watching them pack boxes Of food. Matching uniforms in this random place, Not everyone looked the same. Places with people quitting their jobs right in the middle of the meeting.  

10Eng: The 6 Sentence story

Once upon a time, there once lived a fearless, strong and mighty warrior where he lived in a small town named "Ratuian" the town of the might hero. This warrior has the power of the sun is young likes to clean, help and cook for the townspeople. But one fateful day the warrior... no, the hero had to leave the town to fight the evil outside their gates, when danger comes a hero is needed. He was feeling a bit nervous at the same time scared, his first time going outside of his home town to fight and protect his beloved friends and family. But suddenly he had allies, an army and the empire on his side to fight back the evil and serve the light once and for all. 

The End...

Critical Literacy: Adverts targeting young adults under ages

How are people represented in N.Z Anti drinking advert?

People in different cultures mainly Pacific islanders, Maori's and white people (No Offence) but in N.Z the only people or young adults that represent in Anti drinking adverts are Pacific islanders and Maoris because of the adverts saying that drink with mates or drinking by yourself is bad because of the outcome of the situation after you have left the bar or some mates house. It targets people underage like 16+ and up. 

10Eng:Essay Brainstorming - People under 16 yrs of age should not be allowed?

People under 16 should not be allowed to buy energy drinks?

A lot of people would disagree with what I'm about to say but. I agree, that People under 16 shouldn't be buying energy drinks because it students or people only just drink it because of its taste, unlike some people energy drinks could give them a boost to keep them up for the rest of the day. So for an example, you had gone to sleep too late and decide to have an energy drink to keep you up for the next day.  

10Eng: Creative writing Unexpected wealth Task 4

Unexpected Wealth

So as I was cleaning out my garage because of the state it was in, I managed to find an old shoebox in the corner of the garage collecting dust as it sits there. When I had gotten closer to it and picked it up, the weight of the box seemed off like it was a lot heavier than a normal shoebox. So I took the box from the corner of the garage

and opened it, and inside was something unimaginable what laid in the box was $40,000 inside the box. Before even thinking about taking this money I thought about some questions like how it got there? or who placed it there?. 

10Eng: Creative writing Matrix This is my life task 3

This is my life What am I leaning?
I am learning to understand the matrix tasks and how they should be down. 
How does this work show my learning?
Posting to my blog and giving my feedback to what I think I'm doing.
What I am wondering about?
?

10 Eng:Critical literacy musicals

Different meanings between Masculinity & Femininity 

Masculinity:

-Not just boys have strength. 

-Toughness. 

-Manly.

-Tall. 

-Strong.

-Rugby. 

-Beards. 

Femininity 

-Passive 

-feminism

-Soft/hard voice 

-Loud/quiet 

-Rising children

-Clothes 

 

Somewhere that's green

1) How are adults constructed in this text?

That the adults had somethings that they did but in there own way like cleaning and working and soo on.

2)What kind of social reality does this text portray?

The people think that woman should do all the work, cleaning and responsibility for the children.

So Much Better 

1) How are adults constructed in this text 

The girl in the musical isnt afraid she gives it her all. She was the only girl at of a whole group of boys.

Only one of the boys were able to get into the top 5 people to be a Lawry.

 

2) What kind of social reality does this text portray?

The girl in the musical 

3)How does this text construct a version of reality?

4) What different interpretations of the text are possible? 

10Eng: 4 Items and 1 Paragraph Matrix task 2

Items: Phone, Cliff, house, beach.

In my house, sitting on the edge of the cliff looking out into the bright blue sea of the beach I decided to go out for a walk to get a better view of it. Once I got to the bottom the sun started to set and it was time to make the final mark of the view, I grab out my phone and before taking a pictiure I have a look at the time to keep track then take a picture of the setting sun.

10Eng: Creative writing Matrix Weather with you and Can you hear it task 1

Weather with you

Out of the darkness of the cave, overseeing the beautiful

scene of the sea, the sun shines brightly into my eyes.   

Can You Hear It?

The waves rapidly swished across the river hitting each side of the rock with loud rushing sounds of the water going down the waterfall ready to reach the end.

What am I learning?

I am learning to understand the works of making creative writing in my own words.

How does this work show my learning 

It shows my learning because knowing what to do.  

Self Directed Learning Goals

Can Tell others the ways how I like to learn and what suits me best?

This is one of the Goals That I need to work on may not be the one but yea. I want to improve in talking to other people and letting them know that I have another way of learning different from them.

10Eng: Figurative Language task

What am I learning?

I am learning to understand the meaning of each word in my work.

How does this work show my learning?

It shows that I know what the meanings of each word is and that it may help in the future time.

What I am wondering about?

Nothing really...

10Sp English: Black Mirror Critical Literacy

What am I leaning?
I am learning to understand what "Black Mirror Nosedive" have to do with Critical Literacy.

How does this work show my learning?
It shows it by using some ways to find out what it means.

What I am wondering?
I wonder if we would end up being like her in the future being all rating.

Essay Brainstorming: P.E class wastes students learning time

Do P.E classes waste students learning time?

No, it doesn't, because P.E (Physical Education) helps the body focus on being alive and being active instead of just sitting and not moving. Sure people may think that it is, but most of the students think it is good for health and movement.  

Essay Brainstorming: Reality vs VR (Virtual Reality)

Reality vs VR (Virtual Reality)

Reality is pretty much the best. You get to see more things than inside a VR World plus you would need to know about the world in order to make something digital. Reality is where you get to be free and be around places eat REAL food and so on. On the other hand, you have VR which many people like, you can do things imageable or beyond your limits. A lot of People would prefer VR other than Reality. They don't see some of the problems that they are gonna face in the VR Community that something bad would go wrong and that they wouldn't be able to fix it.  

10Sp:Themes "In The Hunger Games"

THEMES OF HUNGER GAMES

What am I learning?
I am learning to analyze the ideas and themes of a film.   
How does this work show my learning?
Talk about the themes that are important in the film and that it makes it better when we find out ourselves.
What am I wondering?
I wonder if the theme is gonna in the future?

10Eng: Creative presentation

What I am learning?
I am learning to understand how symbols can be 
used in a film.

How does this work show my learning?
By going back into the film and looking at some of the scenes to show what you mean. 

What I am wondering?
Nothing...

Essay Plan/Review

Adverb: Review 

Quickly, I read through my book.

W Start

While I was at a friends house, something loud went off outside.

 

ING Start

Deciding on what to do, I went for it without thinking.

ED Start

Overpowered by the force, I continued on with the mission. 

Red, White and Blue 

Trees are green, brown and black.

In the Capitol, it's bright, grey and Futuristic

Any

When Peeta was mocked by the tributes, He showed his skills of strength

In the Capitol colour, theme, the setting is used to engage the viewer.

In the Capitol, Costumes are used to engage the viewer in the theme of Rich vs Poor. 

 

Challenge Chart

What I am Learning?

I am learning to understand how characters are developed.

How does this work show my learning?

It shows my learning by understanding the meaning of each character's in the film and knowing what their own challenges are.

What I'm wondering?
I wonder do we ever get the feeling we would be changed from what we usually do.

Workshop 4: How is colour used to enhance the story?

What types of colours are used in this location?

How do the different colour palettes change the feel of the story?

Why has the director used these colours?

Meaning of Palette-Colours you're using.

Picture 1 - District 12-the beginning   

Colours: Grey, Brown, Green, white nature palette
Feel: Dark, Old, Gloomy 
Life is hard! they are poor and struggling.
Pictures 2 - The Capitol

Colours: Bright, Cyan, metallic palette, pinks - people silvers, white, grey - environment 
Feel: Crowed, Futuristic, Luxurious  
Life is easy! they are rich and they have access to everything. 
Picture 3 - Control Room 

Colours: Cyan - Blue, White, Black
Hologram Clinical - Clean.
Feel: Technological, Crisp, Clean
These are professional

Themes:
*Rich vs Poor
*Power Struggle
*Hope & Rebellion 

Colour is used effectively to create atmosphere. We see this in the two scenes - District 12 at the beginning and the Capitol as Katniss and Peeta arrive. In District 12 we see a natural palette of browns, greys and greens whereas in the Capitol people wear bright colours and a metallic palette of greys, silvers and white is used. This makes us understand that things in District 12 are dark, old and gloomy whilst life in the Capitol easy, crowded and futuristic. The director did this because of the imbalance of Rich Vs Poor. This shows life is hard and people are poor in the district but in the Capitol Life is easy.  

10Eng:Cats are better than Dogs

So I am learning to brainstorm as many ideas as I can and when ideas come to mind it starts to go all out so filled up everything that came to mind.

My hypothesis:

I stand for cats, my statement is gonna be about "Cat being better than Dogs".

My Strongest points:

Cats are cleaner than dogs. 

Cats are much quieter than dogs. 

Cats make good company when inside.  

I agree Cats are better than doggo's, Hi my name is Jerry A.K.A Jeray and today I am arguing about cats and dogs who would be better at what. My first point is "Cats are cleaner than dogs". It's true that cats are cleaner than dogs because the fact is that they can clean themselves, and you wonder where hairballs come from.  Besides, dogs play in the dirt way too much and then come home making lots of paw prints on the floor of your house.