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Tuesday, 21 May 2019

10Eng :12 ways to write a sentence

8)The - ed Start 
It makes for a punchy opening to the sentence.
Committed, Undaunted, Determined, Forced, Gifted, Blighted, Thrilled, Delighted, Blessed, Overpowered, Bewildered, Drafted, Suprised, foreshadowed.  

E.g " Thrilled by the score, the coach shouted us all Maccas"

Overpowered by force, we couldn't get past the crowd.
Determined to see to the end, but turned out as a failure.

11)The 'W' Start Sentence
The W-start makes writing sound thoughtful and knowledgeable.
Who, While, When, Whilst, Where, What, Whereas.

E.g Whereas Liz Played Netball, I played Hockey.

While I was cleaning the house, I found secret spots of mess hiding under the furniture.
Whilst I'm doing my work, I see random people running around the field.

Point: "Two People is better than one" 
Evidence: In time's where your gonna need two people to help such as lifting, Being there for each other.
Explain: 
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Surprisingly, I became the hero of light but in my dreams.

Before class started, I went to clean myself up.

Taking the time to look, I saw a big crowd rounding up.

Overpowered with excitement, I get up and had a feast with my family.




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